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Naira lune ✨'s avatar

Last few lines will sound really good in Urdu . ✨🤌🏻

The way your words carry visualization in them is soo astonishing and wonderful.✨🫶🏻

Shubham Upman's avatar

Thank you soo much!!! 🥺🙏

You are so correct, those lines would be amazing in urdu!!!

Ameliorating A's avatar

The last para...damn!! Very well written ✨

Shubham Upman's avatar

Tysm!! 🙇‍♂️

Ritika's avatar

Life isn't that simple. You see man lying on road looks like he was carefree. Another man holding a kambal in torn shirt and pant.

But it hit my hard when I saw a old man sitting naked on the road. I don't know what to say vulnerable or lost or found? But certainly what we is not always the case.

Well captured!!

Shubham Upman's avatar

This point is soo true Ritika!!!

Aaliya's avatar

Your words are a reminder of how our circumstances can shape our views and the unexpected places we find admiration. Thanks for sharing this thought-provoking moment.