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Devayani's avatar

Loved the temple. Reminds me of the temple, as school kids, I and my younger sister would go in and sit inside, cool as an AC room, under a huge sprawled peepal tree. Loved the poem too. Envied you too. For such trips to such quiet temples beneath peepal trees.

Shubham Upman's avatar

❤️❤️

Sam Oldman's avatar

I read this as if I'm there. I miss the feel and energy.

Shubham Upman's avatar

This is the best compliment this poem can recieve. Thank you so much!!

Devayani's avatar

💯

Naira lune ✨'s avatar

This was soo good and comforting.✨🤍

So sunset coded.

Like the kind of feel , when you finally get to sit under a tree and feel a — cold breeze, after a hot sizzling day .

The ending was soo beautiful.🫶🏻

The clicks are awesome . ✨🪄

Shubham Upman's avatar

“the kind of feel , when you finally get to sit under a tree and feel a — cold breeze, after a hot sizzling day.” — Wow so apt!!🤌

BrewyTales's avatar

Jay shree ram!

Jay bajarangbali ✨

Shubham Upman's avatar

Jai Hanuman!!